A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday 2. describe some possible disadvantages 3. say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Ashane, I am writing

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letter as a response to the advice you have sought from me about a camping

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and would like to highlight the excitement it could bring to you. Beginning with the joy, a camping

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is always considered to be a fun and

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thrilling activity, because it would allow you to escape from your busy lifestyle.

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, looking at the open sky at night, and seeing the movement of the moon and stars

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singing a song, is a great feeling, as it provides a sense of calmness in a person's mind.

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is the relaxation that I have felt, and I hope you will as well. As far as the challenges are concerned, a camping

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is different to a traditional

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, there are countless bugs flying at night, and you might need to get yourself ready for a few bug bites which would be irritating.

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, the food

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available is not great.

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, you will find some difficulty during meal times. Even though I had camped before, I think

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would be a great opportunity for us to meet, because we have not met with each other since our school graduation.

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, I would like to join you during

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camping

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, If it is fine with you. I look forward to seeing you, and if you need any

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information, please do not hesitate to contact me. Best Regards

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The introduction and closing of the letter are important for setting the tone and wrapping up the message. Make sure they are appropriately formal and match the overall objective of the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

242 words

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adventure
serenity
outdoors
refreshing
hustle and bustle
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wildlife
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physical demands
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