One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified food is a possible solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?.
The world population has increased exponentially in these years and the problem of
food
shortages is slowly arising. While
some people says
that genetically modifying Change the verb form
say
food
might be the solution. This
essay agrees with the suggestion because it helps with global starvation.
Firstly
, a genetically modified
Correct the article-noun agreement
genetically modified crops
a genetically modified crop
crops
will grow significantly faster than normal crops
. Crops
that have their genes altered to be harvested quicker than typical crops
will be able to meet the consumption rate of that crops
solving lack
of Correct article usage
the lack
food
. For example
, a normal potato plant
takes 60 days to be harvestable while
a genetically altered potato plant
will be ready to harvest in 30 days which is able to provide twice the amount of potatoes compared to non genetically
altered potato Add a hyphen
non-genetically
plant
.
Fix the agreement mistake
plants
Secondly
, a plant
can be genetically modified to be disaster resistance
Replace the word
resistant
such
as drought. There are times where
the yield Correct word choice
when
are
lowered Change the verb form
is
due to
natural disasters causing that food
to be on
the deficit supply. Change preposition
in
For instance
, spinach was planned to harvest in a month
time, Change noun form
month's
however
drought hits and most spinach Add a comma
,however
whithered
making the yield 80 Add a missing verb
was whithered
percent
lower than usual.
In conclusion, Change the spelling
per cent
although
genetically modified food
sounds dangerous and not natural, these are the best way to have enough food
flow in the world. Therefore
, plants that are designed to resist unforseen
disaster and Correct your spelling
unforeseen
yeild
more Correct your spelling
yield
food
is one of the best solution
to Change to a plural noun
solutions
food
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