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The table below shows the result of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the result of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table below illustrates the information about McGill University made by
students
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 in terms of surveys in 2005,2010 and 2015.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the most satisfied services
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the university of
students
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 were library resources in 2005 and 2010.
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, in 2015, Student services were the most popular number of
students
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.
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, sports and social facilities remained the same throughout the decade. Throughout the decade, The number of teaching quality slightly increased by approximately over 70%. Another slightly upward tends was library resources ,which was just under 90%. Meanwhile, student services were the only one that had a significant increase with
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 54% up to almost two times higher in 2015 In terms of the downward tended, the Range of modules offered was the only one in the groups that were satisfied by
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 at 39% and 31% respectively, and sharply decreased to a quarter.
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, Sports and social facilities remained the same at 65 in three different years.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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