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in many modern socities grandchildren spend any quality time with their grandparents . what do you are the consequence of this.

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Nowadays,most grandchildren do not spend more often with their
grandparents
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.It cannot be denied that as
time
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 passes on,children have lots of things to do as their responsibilities.It decreases the
time
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 for family, social and hobbies.
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.children are not familiar close enough with their
grandparents
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. From my perspective,
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 people have tight schedules,they have to manage their
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 for family activities.
Grandparents
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 have a wide range of experiences to share with their
grandparents
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.They can teach them love and humanity which are not taught in school lessons.
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, tradition and culture hand to hand with our ancestors.
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 of learning as a subject,it would be better to hear from older people.
Grandparents
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 can show how to bake a cake or play traditional games that even some parents do not know and have
time
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 to teach their kids. As a matter of fact,most of the
grandparents
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 retire and are more likely to spend their
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 at home.At that
time
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,they can feel lonely and want someone to talk to.As they get older,they attach to their family and grandchildren.In modern society,it is really difficult for them to adjust to technology and they are not interested in that for spending their
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.In
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 situation, grandchildren are the ones who can handle best that condition.The
last
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 one is to give a hand to
grandparents
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 by having meals together, gardening and taking care of their health mentally and physically.
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,
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 young people have a tight schedule, spending
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 with
grandparents
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 is not a waste of
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 and life lessons can be learned from them in a fun way.
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