3.In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer?
In
this
modern era, majority
of individuals across the globe have kept Correct article usage
the majority
guns
at
their households for safety and recreational purposes. To my mind, I argue against the Change preposition
in
use
of guns
. Recently, the use
of guns
freely has lead
to an increase in Wrong verb form
led
the
mortality rates.
Correct article usage
apply
To begin
with, having arms at residence prompts the young children to use
it
. Correct pronoun usage
them
This
increases the risk factor as they are not aware of guns
functioning. Even a small click can cost you a life. According to
the US accidental deaths, it is stated that, on an
average 150 death have been recorded because of the Correct article usage
apply
use
of guns
in households. The report further
more
states that, all the accidents had happened as the teenagers were curious to Correct quantifier usage
apply
use
it and showcase it among their peer group and post it on social media for popularity purpose
.
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purposes
In addition
to that, a violent argument between spouses or friends,
outrages an individual to take extreme advantage of the gun and shoot in aggression at the opposite person. It has Remove the comma
apply
also
been reported that the increase in suicides occurred due to
easy
availability of Correct article usage
the easy
guns
at the home itself. A study conducted at Chicago University, reports that the majority of times it is the male dominancy that has used the arms out of frustration or aggression in situations where losses are incurred or their personal ego has been hurt. Hence
, revenge is taken.
To sum up
, multiple evidences
have been given about high death ratios caused by Change the wording
pieces of evidence
shreds of evidence
guns
that are kept at
households. I advocate that a strict law shall be passed for Change preposition
in
privategun
Correct your spelling
private gun
ownerships
.Fix the agreement mistake
ownership
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