the pic charts illustrates the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or car

the pic charts illustrates the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or car
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The pie charts explain the main reasons why people go to work by bike or car.
overall
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it can be seen that the most factor influencing
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decision for cyclists are physical health and environmental issues,
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car drivers consider the convenience of
cars
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. Having a healthy body and a clean environment accounted for 60% of bike riders' reasons, with an equal division.
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, a large number of people, 40%, choose
cars
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since they are very comfortable, and their second reasons were long distances to work, 21%. the other contributing factors are much smaller in both groups. With regards to
cars
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, being able to carry things and reaching to destinations faster accounted for 28% combined, with an equal proportion. similar to car drivers, 28 % of cyclists choose
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mode of transportation because they do not need to look for parking spots and pay lots of money for maintenance, at 15% and 13% respectively. The
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reason for both groups came in an almost similar number, 11% believe that
cars
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are safer than bicycles, and 12% think that bikes are faster than
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • cardiovascular health
  • carbon footprint
  • commute
  • congestion
  • ecological footprint
  • emissions
  • fuel efficiency
  • metropolitan
  • public transport
  • sustainable
  • traffic jams
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