The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The diagram presents the
population
percentage
in 4 Asian countries, which live in cities from 1970 to 2020 and anticipation for 2030 to 2040. Overall
, people
from all 4 countries tend to live more in urban areas. A considerable amount of people
from Malaysia have moved to the city at the highest rate.
Indonesia's population
percentage
had increased from approximately 14 per cent
in 1970 to almost 50 per cent
in 2020. Then
, it is expected to go higher in 2030 and 2040 at around 55 and 60 per cent
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the percentage
of the population
living in cities in Thailand had also
risen from around 18 per cent
in 1970 to 30 per cent
in 2020, and it is anticipated to increase to roughly 45 per cent
in 2040. In the Philippines, it fluctuated in the early years. The percentage
started at around 31 per cent
in 1970. It rose to 50 per cent
in 1990 and dropped to approximately 40 per cent
in 2010. It is predicted to increase to 50 in 2040. The population
living in urban areas in Malaysia had increased at an astonishing rate from 30 per cent
in 1970 to around 72 per cent
in 2020. It is forecast to rise higher in 2030 at nearly 80 per cent
and in 2040 at 80 per cent
.
In conclusion, there are more people
from these 4 Asian countries moving to urban areas, and it is predicted to be more people
moving to the city.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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