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The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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The diagram presents the
population
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percentage
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 in 4 Asian countries, which live in cities from 1970 to 2020 and anticipation for 2030 to 2040.
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,
people
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 from all 4 countries tend to live more in urban areas. A considerable amount of
people
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 from Malaysia have moved to the city at the highest rate. Indonesia's
population
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percentage
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 had increased from approximately 14 per
cent
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 in 1970 to almost 50 per
cent
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 in 2020.
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, it is expected to go higher in 2030 and 2040 at around 55 and 60 per
cent
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the
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 of the
population
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 living in cities in Thailand had
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 risen from around 18 per
cent
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 in 1970 to 30 per
cent
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 in 2020, and it is anticipated to increase to roughly 45 per
cent
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 in 2040. In the Philippines, it fluctuated in the early years. The
percentage
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 started at around 31 per
cent
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 in 1970. It rose to 50 per
cent
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 in 1990 and dropped to approximately 40 per
cent
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 in 2010. It is predicted to increase to 50 in 2040. The
population
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 living in urban areas in Malaysia had increased at an astonishing rate from 30 per
cent
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 in 1970 to around 72 per
cent
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 in 2020. It is forecast to rise higher in 2030 at nearly 80 per
cent
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 and in 2040 at 80 per
cent
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. In conclusion, there are more
people
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 from these 4 Asian countries moving to urban areas, and it is predicted to be more
people
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 moving to the city.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, percentage, people, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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