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many people believe that a university education is necessary for a good career. do you agree or disagree? what other factors can contribute to a good career?

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A Majority of us commit that
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 University
education
 is essential for a bright future
while
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 am not agree with the aforementioned statement. There are so many other aspects which can lead to
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 better career. In
this
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both phases. First of all, there are innumerable people who are of high rank and are not well-educated.
For
example
, the bank manager of the bank where
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 did my internship had only a degree of intermediate and was managing the whole department.
While
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 another
example
 is Mukesh Ambani who is
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 the list of the world's richest men is not highly educated he said "
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 higher
education
 is necessary for success".
Therefore
,
education
 provided by the university or college isn't mandatory for
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 distinguished career.
Moreover
, another
example
 is of a Doctor
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 was watching on social media
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 days. He hadn't found a good job for him despite having a Doctorate degree. I was shocked
while
 seeing
this
 and
this
 is a big
example
 of the aforementioned statement.
Furthermore
, there can be so many other components that come up with a shining future.
Ahigher
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A higher
education
 is equal to one's talent and skills.
For
example
, if you have
brain-power
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 and skills it will not go anywhere. In
fact
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 you can work from home using your potential. There are so many social media influencers who are earning millions just by doing
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. In conclusion,
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 would say that a university
education
 isn't compulsory for a successful career, the world has come to an innovative age. So creativity added with Brain-power can get more success.
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