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These days more father stay at home and take care of their children while mother go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive of negative development?

#father #home #care #children #mother #work #development
It is true that an increasing
number
 of
men
 has
been appeared
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 who
chosen
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 to stay at home to look after
children
 as
opposite
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 to going to work.Inversely,
women
 play a role
of
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 making money in the family.There are many
reasons
 behind
this
 trend. In my opinion, It is positive to see
this
 happening. On the one hand, there are many
reasons
 why
this
 phenomenon
take
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 place.
Firstly
, the spring up of feminism is one of the main
reasons
 for
this
 trend.
Women
 who receive higher education want to
fulfill
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 their ambitions and break the barrier of
traditional
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the traditional
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 conception that
women
 must
be
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stay at home and looking after
their
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 next generations.
Secondly
,
the
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social equality has been improved.
The most
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of
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the
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people believe that whatever the different gender or nation，all individuals should receive equal treatment in society.
For example
, gender is no longer
a
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 sole factor of promotion opportunities in companies，which
inspire
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 many females
go
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 out to work.
The
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last
 but not least, one of the most important
element
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elements
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 is the impact of
global
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the global
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 economic crisis.After the recession of 2008,
large
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number
 of workers lose their job, especially
men
 in
construction
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the construction
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 and manufacturing industry, which dramatically accelerated
this
 trend.
This
 phenomenon that
men
 and wife switch their careers can bring lots of benefits.
To begin
 with,
children
 can become more independent and tough with
father's
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their father's
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 care.
For instance
, compare with the mother who is tolerant and doting. The father,
usually
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 strict with their
children
 and encourage them to become an independent person who has a precious quality of bravely
face
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 all difficulties.
Then
, during the process of taking care of the
children
,
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the male
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male
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males
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 will become more responsible, which definitely increases
stability
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the stability
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 and welfare of
family
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the family
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.
In addition
,
women
 going out to find a job can reduce social gender discrimination
in
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 some extent and encourage more
female
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females
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 to pursue their dreams.
as
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 a result
the
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social equality will be effectively improved. In conclusion, there are
number
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 of
reasons
 contributing to
this
 result,
such
 as economics, higher education,
even
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and even
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 the evolution of society.Personally, I think it seems
against
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traditional
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tradition
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 for
men
 to stay at home and
women
go
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to go
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 out to make
profit
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a profit
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, but it can truly bring a great
number
 of advantages to the world.
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