The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.

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The given map represents the detail of the city of Canterbury, a is for a new education area and s is for planned for the place and it contains two different

entrance

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of schools.

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, it can be clearly seen that the countryside and town mid planned to change in upcoming times and the rest of things will stay unchanged. It can

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noticed

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from the picture

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diagram

that the large

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amount

area

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is covered by countryside which will

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in future and it

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outline of the map.

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, in the north centre

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university

is located and in the centre town with no traffic zone is

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observed

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which is planned to tune into

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. Moving ahead , the remaining area is covered by housing which

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unchange

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unchanged

and in the centre of the map one road is run from the

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to south

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that is

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to town and in future it will be the door of door ,

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it is 7km to

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with 4500 population

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direction it is 5km to sturry with 7,000 population.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

195 words

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

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