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The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.
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The given map represents the detail of the city of Canterbury, a is for a new education area and s is for planned for the place and it contains two different
entrance
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 of schools.
Overall
 , it can be clearly seen that the countryside and town mid planned to change in upcoming times and the rest of things will stay unchanged. It can
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noticed
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 from the picture
dirgram
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diagram
 that the large
amonut
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amount
 of
area
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 is covered by countryside which will
be change
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 in future and it
also
 gives
a
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 outline of the map.
However
 , in the north centre
univerisity
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university
 is located and in the centre town with no traffic zone is
obvered
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observed
covered
wherea
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where
 which is planned to tune into
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. Moving ahead , the remaining area is covered by housing which
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unchange
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unchanged
and in the centre of the map one road is run from the
north east
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 to south
wast
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west
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that is
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 to town and in future it will be the door of door ,
moreover
 , in south
side
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 it is 7km to
chartham
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Chartham
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 with 4500 population
while
 in
nother
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another
 direction it is 5km to sturry with 7,000 population.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • contrast
  • location
  • accessibility
  • residential areas
  • facilities
  • traffic
  • transportation
  • environment
  • cost
  • feasibility
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