The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar graph illustrates, information about the number of prisoners in Great Britain, Australia, New
Zealand
, the United States and Canada
from the year 1930 to 1980.Overall
, it is noticeable that the United States has the maximum amount of people
in custody from 1940 to 1980. In contrast
, the United Kingdom has the minimum amount of captivity.
In 1930, Canada
has the highest range of people
to be in jail, with a rate of approximately 120. Whereas
New Zealand
and the US have an equal amount of 100 and Australia's count was 70. In this
year Canada
has the least value as 30. From 1940 to 1960, all countries' growth were fluctuating but ,still the US people
in jail rate was above 100.
By 1970, Great Britain, Australia and New Zealand
's figures became stable at 68 digits while
the US and Canada
have a drastic reduction to 90 and 85. By the end of 1980, the US custody rate has peaked at 130 and was in a leading position. On the other hand
, Canada
, Great Britain and New Zealand
hold similar numbers such
as 89, 82 and 85. Canada
has the least count of people
to be in incarceration with 50.Submitted by sowmya madhavan on
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