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The table below shows the percentages of moblie phone owners using various mobile phone features from 2006 to 2010.

The table below shows the percentages of moblie phone owners using various mobile phone features from 2006 to 2010.
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The given table compares information about the proportion of smartphone users using seven
features
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 of the mobile phone in 3 different
years
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 namely 2006, 2008 and 2010.
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, making calls is the most popular
feature
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 that using by smartphone owners in 3
years
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 given. It is followed by sending and receiving text messages and taking photos.
In addition
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, the percentages of other
features
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 that are used by people
also
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 show an
increase
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 from 2006 to 2010, but, it is under 50 %. Looking into details, it is evident that making calls as a
feature
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 of the smartphone experienced the highest percentages in 3 different
years
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 which is 100 % (2006), 100% ( 2008), and decreased slightly to 99% in 2010.
Furthermore
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, from 2006 to 2010, the rate of sending and receiving messages witnessed an
increase
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 from 73 % to 75 % and 79 % in 2010.
Moreover
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, there was an
increase
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 in the take photo
features
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 between 2006 and 2008 from 66 % to 71 %,
then
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 rose gradually by 76 % in 2010.
In contrast
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, other
features
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 of smartphones depict the percentage under half per cent which plays games
feature
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, which increased from 2006 until 2008,
then
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 fell slightly in 2010; 17 %, 42 % and 41% respectively.
Additionally
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, there was an
increase
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 in the proportion of play music
features
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 in 2006, 2008 and 2010 namely 12 %, 18 % and 26 % in turn. Meanwhile, in 2006, people did not use search the Internet and record video
feature
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.
However
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, in the following ,
years
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 the percentages from that 2
features
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 experienced increased significantly.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words features, years, feature, increase with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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