The table below shows the percentages of moblie phone owners using various mobile phone features from 2006 to 2010.
The given table compares information about the proportion of smartphone users using seven
features
of the mobile phone in 3 different years
namely 2006, 2008 and 2010.
Overall
, making calls is the most popular feature
that using by smartphone owners in 3 years
given. It is followed by sending and receiving text messages and taking photos. In addition
, the percentages of other features
that are used by people also
show an increase
from 2006 to 2010, but, it is under 50 %.
Looking into details, it is evident that making calls as a feature
of the smartphone experienced the highest percentages in 3 different years
which is 100 % (2006), 100% ( 2008), and decreased slightly to 99% in 2010. Furthermore
, from 2006 to 2010, the rate of sending and receiving messages witnessed an increase
from 73 % to 75 % and 79 % in 2010. Moreover
, there was an increase
in the take photo features
between 2006 and 2008 from 66 % to 71 %, then
rose gradually by 76 % in 2010.
In contrast
, other features
of smartphones depict the percentage under half per cent which plays games feature
, which increased from 2006 until 2008, then
fell slightly in 2010; 17 %, 42 % and 41% respectively. Additionally
, there was an increase
in the proportion of play music features
in 2006, 2008 and 2010 namely 12 %, 18 % and 26 % in turn. Meanwhile, in 2006, people did not use search the Internet and record video feature
. However
, in the following ,years
the percentages from that 2 features
experienced increased significantly.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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