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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
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The given bar chart illustrates the outcomes of
a
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 estimation, which did in five urban areas in
the
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Australia, regarding the consumption and tendency of using
coffee
 and tea.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the citizens in four towns have gone considerably to a cafeteria for
coffee
 or tea in
last
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 month more than buying fresh or instant
coffee
except
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 residents in
the
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Adelaide.
On the other hand
, the other prominent pattern is that fresh
coffee
 users are low in
whole
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the whole
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 five
location
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. Looking at these details, the customers, who purchased
to
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fresh
coffee
 in
previous
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 month, display a level of lower than 45% in all five zones. A glance at,
this
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decline
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 compared with other utilization rates.
According to
these
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proportion
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proportions
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, in
last
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the last
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 30 days, the locals, who live in
sydney
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Sydney
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, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart, have used
in
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the highest percentage
a
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of
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shop
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shops
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 for hot drinks,
such
 as
coffee
 or tea. It
taked
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took
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 a maximum level of 65%
percentage
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percent
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 between Melbourne and Hobart. Buyers of fresh and
instance
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coffee
 could not
passed
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 above 55% during
prior
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 month.
However
, the individuals, who spend money
for
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coffee
, have conducted relatively a moderate level over
than
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others. Apparently,
at
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 only one occasion, instant
coffee
 buyers may have overcome the
coffee
 shop users by a little amount. It would be recorded as
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50%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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