People in many countries are spending less time with their family. What are the reasons, and effects of this?
Residents in a lot of nations are spending a reduced amount of
time
with family. My essay will outline a number of reasons for this
trend and a number of its associated effects.
To begin
with, this
trend has several reasons. one of the main causes of this
problem is the nature of the work. They have to work busily all day so they have very little time
to spend with their family. For instance
, nowadays in Vietnam people usually spend an average of 8 to 12 hours a day working. When they are occupied with their job, they will also
need to rest. Therefore
, do not have enough time
for their household. Meanwhile, kids today are also
under great pressure from the study. For example
, school learners in Asian countries usually spend 10 hours a day and 6 days a week at school, not to mention
extra classes in the evening. Consequently
, They also
don't have time
to spend with their father and mother. Obviously, due to
the rapid development of technology, people are abused by electronic devices such
as smartphones or computers.
However
, there are several effects of this
trend, which all tend to be detrimental. Firstly
, the short time
spent with the family means that the children are also
less interested and paid attention by their parents. In fact, the lack of affection from parents will make children’s psyches hurt, leading to moodiness and disappointment. Even if it lasts too long, it will cause depression in children. Secondly
, closing the generation gap between parents and children will become more difficult without family bonding share. So family relationships will be affected and may lead to conflict and unhappiness.
In conclusion, people are having less and less time
with family largely due to
work and study pressures, and the impacts of this
on both individuals and families are severe.Submitted by anhnguhongmai on
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