The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
These two illustrations demonstrate the development of an
island
before and after the construction of tourist facilities.
Overall
, the
island
before the building of tourist facilities had nothing but trees on the surface with a
beach
on the east side of it. After the arrangement of
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tourism, the
island
had immensely changed, accounting for a pier for boats, accommodations spreading from the centre to the east for the guests to stay, a swimming area, and a restaurant. Before the construction, there was no sign of development but some trees
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around the
island
to the west and east. Other than having a small number of trees, there was a
beach
on the east side. After the changes, the
island
was completely transformed into a tourist attraction from not having a pier for boats to let people on the
island
. After a stroll of approximately 300 meters, guests find the reception. Behind that building, roughly about 200 meters, there is a restaurant. Whoever travelling to the
island
now has accommodations in which they can stay on the east and west of the reception. The tourists are allowed to swim and enjoy the
beach
, accessed via the footpath connecting the accommodation and the
beach
.
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  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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