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Some people think that zoo are cruel and all zoos should closed.However, some people think zoo can help protect animals Discuss both views and give your own opinion

#people #zoo #zoos #animals
Nowadays,
most
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 common
atraction
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attraction
traction
 in cities and towns around the world
are
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 zoos. For
an
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every child and
an
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adult
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 it is
most
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the most
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 popular and demanded place to see. We watch
alive
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animals
 in open-air cages, but isn't that offence against nature creations? Do we help them to survive or we are slowly killing them? At some
point
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 it is usual to claim that zooparks protect
animals
 from natural environmental disasters and criminals who are illegally killing more and more beasts to sell their fur, meat etc. .
However
, there is
the
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another side
of
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 that point. We don't provide
animals
enough
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 freedom,
as a result
, we just kill them. First of all, when we put
animals
 in cages in countries around the world, we put them in extreme climate conditions, foreign
environment
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 and new food which are not ordinary for them.
This
 leads to situations when
animals
 are dying and eventually some species are becoming lost.
Furthermore
, nowadays most popular zooparks format is contacts zoos. There everyone can touch an animal,
however
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 most people do not understand the meaning of that touch for a creature. In the wild
animals
 have instincts which
says
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: "
Then
 someone big wants to touch you, that means he is dangerous and it can kill you". So, when we lay
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our hand
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hand
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 on an animal, it gets frightened and feels stressed, when there are thousands of touches per day specie just dyes from stress. To
cocnlude
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conclude
, in my point of
view
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 zoos are cruel places for
animals
.
There
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These
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 beasts live in non-freedom conditions and
dye
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die
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 from stress, just because someone wants to see them.
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