Recently you visited a foreign country with a friend write a letter to someone. You should tell why you enjoyed the trip what you are doing now invite her to visit you

Dear Ana, I am writing to invite you to my party which I am hosting

this

weekend. My sister returned from Canada

last

month and she's soon celebrating her 30th birthday. On the occasion of

this

, we are planning to have a simple party in my home, and I have already decided few of the events we are hosting plus the number of visitors. It's going to be a small celebration and it will commence at 4 pm. I really hope you make it to my party

this

time since it's been a long time since we met. Regarding the location,I am already aware that you have my address with you but when you reach my place, be sure to take 5th Street

instead

of 4th Street because that's an easier way to reach my place.

Also

, our home is just beside the secondary school, and the entrance is just opposite the main gate. Once you reach there, call me on my mobile and I'll help you with more directions.

Furthermore

, for accommodation, you can stay with us the whole weekend if you wish, since it's difficult to plan at the

last

minute. But, if you prefer staying outside, there are a few motels and hostels near 5th Street. So, if you have any doubts, do write back to me, I'll check on the details. Best Regards, Hema.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

228 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

thrilled
mesmerizing
memorable
cultural immersion
local cuisine
breathtaking vistas
currently
engaged in
exciting developments
personal projects
warm invitation
explore
look forward to
hospitality
arrangements

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