Recently you visited a foreign country with a friend write a letter to someone. You should tell why you enjoyed the trip what you are doing now invite her to visit you

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Dear Ana, I am writing to invite you to my party which I am hosting
this
weekend. My sister returned from Canada
last
month and she's soon celebrating her 30th birthday. On the occasion of
this
, we are planning to have a simple party in my home, and I have already decided few of the events we are hosting plus the number of visitors. It's going to be a small celebration and it will commence at 4 pm. I really hope you make it to my party
this
time since it's been a long time since we met. Regarding the location,I am already aware that you have my address with you but when you reach my place, be sure to take 5th Street
instead
of 4th Street because that's an easier way to reach my place.
Also
, our home is just beside the secondary school, and the entrance is just opposite the main gate. Once you reach there, call me on my mobile and I'll help you with more directions.
Furthermore
, for accommodation, you can stay with us the whole weekend if you wish, since it's difficult to plan at the
last
minute. But, if you prefer staying outside, there are a few motels and hostels near 5th Street. So, if you have any doubts, do write back to me, I'll check on the details. Best Regards, Hema.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • thrilled
  • mesmerizing
  • memorable
  • cultural immersion
  • local cuisine
  • breathtaking vistas
  • currently
  • engaged in
  • exciting developments
  • personal projects
  • warm invitation
  • explore
  • look forward to
  • hospitality
  • arrangements
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