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The chart below compares the number of people per household in the UK in 1981 and 2001

The chart below compares the number of people per household in the UK in 1981 and 2001
#people #household #uk
The diagram gives information about how many
people
 lived in one home in the
UK
 in
two
 separate years in 1981 and 2001.
Overall
, the number of
people
 per household of
two
people
 was the most common live in the
UK
. Over the 20-year period, there were considerable increases in a-person and
two
-
people
 groups,
while
 the family groups of more than three
people
 declined. Looking first at 1981, the percentage of the
two
people
families
 commanded the biggest share of the
UK
's
families
, at 31%, followed by
families
 with three
people
 and four
people
, with the corresponding figures being 20% and 18%. The next most popular household was single living, with 17%,
while
 the bigger
families
such
 as five
people
 and six
people
 were far less likely to live, ranging from 6-8%, with the biggest group being the least. After twenty years, the number of
families
 with
two
people
 rose by 3% compared to 1981 and
this
 remained the largest share in the
UK
. The percentage of a person increased the most considerably in the
UK
, by 26% in almost
two
 decades,
while
 that of three-
people
 and four-
people
 groups had seen a downward trend of 3%.
Finally
, the rate of five
people
 group
families
 was 2% smaller and that of six
people
 group was less popular, with a figure of 2%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, uk, two, families with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "considerable" was used 2 times.
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