The chart below compares the number of people per household in the UK in 1981 and 2001

The chart below compares the number of people per household in the UK in 1981 and 2001
The diagram gives information about how many
people
lived in one home in the
UK
in
two
separate years in 1981 and 2001.
Overall
, the number of
people
per household of
two
people
was the most common live in the
UK
. Over the 20-year period, there were considerable increases in a-person and
two
-
people
groups,
while
the family groups of more than three
people
declined. Looking first at 1981, the percentage of the
two
people
families
commanded the biggest share of the
UK
's
families
, at 31%, followed by
families
with three
people
and four
people
, with the corresponding figures being 20% and 18%. The next most popular household was single living, with 17%,
while
the bigger
families
such
as five
people
and six
people
were far less likely to live, ranging from 6-8%, with the biggest group being the least. After twenty years, the number of
families
with
two
people
rose by 3% compared to 1981 and
this
remained the largest share in the
UK
. The percentage of a person increased the most considerably in the
UK
, by 26% in almost
two
decades,
while
that of three-
people
and four-
people
groups had seen a downward trend of 3%.
Finally
, the rate of five
people
group
families
was 2% smaller and that of six
people
group was less popular, with a figure of 2%.
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