The chart below shows the employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.

The chart below shows the employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.
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employment rates in two time periods from around six countries.
Overall
, Male individuals have been dominating the job sector since 1995 and it
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did in the year 2005 as well. The least recruited female countries are Australia and New Zealand in 1995 with less than 30%.
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the data Men in 1995 were hired in all countries more than 50% and except in ,Iceland they were substantially 70% employed. Over the period male category have seen an exponential hike in recruitment in 2005 ranging between 65% to 80% and in Iceland on the top at 82%.
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, the women category has
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seen gradual growth with no less than 35% and the highest of all is Switzerland which had an excess amount of female hirers approximately 68%.
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every nation has shown significant development in the span of ten years.
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