The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
bar chart depicts the number of people
drinking or buying tea and coffee
in different Australian cities
. It is clear from the graph that people
went to a cafe for hot drinks that is
more popular in five cities
.
According to
what is shown, people
who go to a coffee
shop to drink coffee
and tea in Melbourne and Hobart
is equal and expresses 63% while
in Sydney less by 2% only, After that, Brisbane comes fourth, making up 55% of its population, the lowest city percentage is Hobart
, 49%. While
people
who bought instant coffee
in the last
month were Hobart
which expresses 54 per cent
, As for Brisbane, it is the second city and constitutes 53% of its population. while
the rest of the cities
range from 50 to 46 per cent
. the group who buy fresh coffee
in the last
28 days most in two cities
, Sydney and Melbourne from 44 to 42 per cent
from residents. While
Brisbane and Adelaide are equal in proportion at 34%, while
Hobart
got 38 per cent
.
To sum up
, we could say that buying fresh coffee
unpopular unlike going to a coffee
shop was more popular in all cities
.Submitted by ahmed.alzhrany883 on
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