Fewer and fewer young people are choosing to become teachers. Why do young people not want to be teachers? How could this be changed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
This
is an era driven by science and technology. The younger generation
is fully equipped with all sources of knowledge and options to choose fields
for their career. Irrespective of place or country, the internet opened doors of opportunities in all fields
. These are the underpinning reasons for many youngsters to opt for tech and science-focused jobs thus
reducing their inclination towards becoming educators or teachers rapidly.
In my opinion, Teaching is been seen as a less adventurous job profile as compared to other fields
. This
may be due to
the repetitive nature of the job and also
the in-house / office-type work routine. On another hand high-tech and science-oriented jobs are more delivery
focused with exposure to the outside world is been seen as more lucrative to the younger Replace the word
delivered
generation
. One of my siblings who is inherited from a teacher's family, opted to go for Medical Sciences after high school. Despite all avenues being open in universities with his parent's reputation, he zeroed down to become a doctor. Of course
the aspiration matters against the perks and benefits the Add a comma
,course
profession
brings to you. ,,
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apply
However
her decision shocked our family. I am sure Add a comma
,However
this
is a common trend everyone around us sees in their families and social circle happening.
Now to change this
trend or socio-mentality, I would rather opt for a change in the point of view itself. Teaching is been seen as a non-challenging, not-so-profitable profession
. I would try to roll this
over as teachers of a new era not just in science, mathematics and engineering but also
in the Arts and commerce fields
. These teachers will become the brain of the new generation
who will be front-ending all new ventures along with
the students in live situations that could be advanced laboratories, in science experiments. We should enable sponsors to come forward to build this
infrastructure for our schools and universities. As a parent, its
our duty to set the focus of our kids to look at Replace the word
it's
it is
this
from a wider and "enabler" angle.
In summary, every profession
has its pros and cons. I believe Teaching is a profession
where you deliver knowledge and skills to the mass, to build a well-educated and well-mannered society of tomorrow. Such
a noble profession
should be honoured and well developed according to
the needs to
changing times, and that's how our younger Change preposition
of
generation
will start adopting this
as their career of choice.Submitted by t.akanksha.mba on
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