The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times.

The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times.
Two given pictures illustrate the current condition of a Spanish city named Castellom
as well as
the changes have been done after 23 years.
Overall
, the town went through a number of renovations and establishments of new infrastructures.
To begin
with, in 2000, though the university had no accommodation for the student, now a hall of residence was built on the left side and the vegetation is superseded by a new shopping centre at the northeast corner.
While
in the past the road was used by vehicles, now it is only accessible by pedestrians. New cinemas
along with
bars and clubs were made between the port and the street.
Moreover
, the train station got its new appearance though is it now in the northern part of the city centre.
Additionally
, the old market is changed by some new shops
while
a new cover market was built on the east side of the centre. The old city had no police station, even though there is a new one in the place of the previous train station.
Finally
, a new airport is under construction on the right part of the tramline.
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