It is important for the childern to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. puninshment is necesssary to help them learn this distinction. to what extent do youagree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment parents and teachers be allowed to use?

Many people say that it is essential for their children to be aware and gain

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knowledge on the differences

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right and wrong

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their early childhood.

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, punishing them is considered

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a necessity to help at

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distinction. I disagree with

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statement because being cruel to children at an early age is bad and it

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to be altered with understanding and saying about the differences without the punishment. I strongly disagree with

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belief. Showing

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cruelness

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to a child is traumatizing. Because punishing

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limits might get them hurt mentally.

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, the fact that they have enough time to think about white and black

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to be considered

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of the given belief.

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, recent research concluded that people may assume that rules and showings some facts about

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things will not hurt children's feelings

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punishing them without consideration

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their mental health. Allegedly ,it can be differentiated with polite and gentle words and giving them

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time to think

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overal

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this

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approaches can help them to gain their

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knowledge about right and wrong things ,

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building

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good relationships with not only the family

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but

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with any people they meet in their present and future.

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it is mostly accepted that understanding and giving a hand when it is necessary will help to have

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and think wisely without

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punishment. In my conclusion ,it is widely accepted that it is crucial for juveniles to learn to

differ

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the conceptions from right to wrong and

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punishing is the best approach. I don't agree with the statement and any sort of punishment cannot teach

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good

behavior

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to them.

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, it can be

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changed

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giving them

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time and understanding.