he graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

he graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The line graph displays data trends about overseas
visitors
Use synonyms
to
mountain
Use synonyms
, coast and lake areas of a European country from 1987 to 2007.
It is clear that
Linking Words
the
overall
Linking Words
amount of travellers increased throughout the years for all the considered regions, with a steep rise for coastal travel, modest growth for
mountain
Use synonyms
areas, and a wild fluctuation for lake tourism. Coastal and
mountain
Use synonyms
tourism enjoyed a roughly stable increase in the number of tourists throughout the considered time interval. The number of
visitors
Use synonyms
in
mountain
Use synonyms
areas almost doubled in 20 years, climbing from 20 000 people to slightly below 40 000 tourists. Coastal tourism saw a slight decrease from 1987 to 1992 but
then
Linking Words
surged by 40000
visitors
Use synonyms
in 1992 to almost 80000 in 2007. The number of foreigners to the lake area of the European country steadily rose from 1987 to 1997,
then
Linking Words
steeply jumped from 40000 to roughly 80000 but
then
Linking Words
sank by almost 50% in the following ten years, reaching a total of 50000
visitors
Use synonyms
in 2007.
Submitted by giulia-guglielmi on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, mountain with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "steep" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
What to do next:
Look at other essays: