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The charts below show movie preferences in the country of Evonia for people aged from 20-35 years, 36-50 years and 51-65 years.

The charts below show movie preferences in the country of Evonia for people aged from 20-35 years, 36-50 years and 51-65 years.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of personal interest in watching
movies
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 by 5 different
age
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 groups. The list includes 5 types of
movies
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 namely,
action
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, romantic, documentary,
horror
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 and animation.
Overall
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,it can be clearly seen that seniors of 64 or above are not interested in scary and animated
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,
whereas
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 children
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younger than 20 completely ignored romantic and documentary shows.
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, People of
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 from 21 to 45 prefer to watch all types of films. In terms of children and youngsters, it has been observed that they enjoy
action
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 ,
horror
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 and animation
movies
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 more as compared to other categories. The highest number of animated films is watched by kids at around 50,
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 they do not watch romantic and documentaries at all.
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 to
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, the same trend is followed by young adults under the
age
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 of 20.
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, folks of
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from
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21 to 45 enjoyed all sorts of dramas,
however
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action
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, documentaries and
horror
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 are their
most
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favourite with 30 or more
movies
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. The rate of watching
action
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 ,romantic and documentaries for old people remained at 30 or under with 0 interest in
horror
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 and animation.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words movies, age, action, horror with synonyms.
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