In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out the history of the house or building they live in What are the reasons for this ? How can people research this ?

Nowadays, some
people
believe that they have to have lots of information about the past of the
house
or flat
which
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they are living. In
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, essay I will answers the what are the reasons for
this
and how can
people
research
this
.
Firstly
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number of
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population in some countries has increased sharply in
this
century, so accommodation
is become
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more important than past.
People
tend to know about
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the house
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house
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which they want to buy or rent
,
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because they never spend their money
to
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home
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which has
bad
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a bad
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or horrible history.
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, in 1995, not only do jack markson
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his wife and 3 children but he
also
homicide,
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all the newspapers wrote about that story and after
3 year
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government
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has
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tried to sell that
house
but unfortunately no one
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to buy that place after 18 years.
Overall
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home's
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histories
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is too important for individuals who want to live there,
thus
they try to find
data
about that. In the same
way
, there are two important ways
to
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some
people
who want to catch information about the places which they want to live. The first
way
is the internet, cyber links present many accommodation
hole
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around the world, you can find many
data
such
as
a
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first owner,date of
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or materials
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used and
data
about
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restoration,
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the
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cyber links are the best
way
if
people
prefer to buy through that platforms. The second one is
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way
, they can investigate by neighbours, because
major
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part of them spent
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hole
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of
they
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life
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in that place,
hence
not only do they give lots of information but they
also
can give
data
about your new neighbours. In conclusion, accommodation and its histories are so important for some
part
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of
societies
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, so they try to investigate about
house
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the house
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that they live in. In
this
way
, they are so many sources but cyber links and neighbours are the first
one
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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