The bar graph compares the percentage of university education among youths in six different countries between 2000 and 2007.
The given chart illustrates the data of young people attending universities in 6 different countries namely Italy,
Spain
, the UK, Poland
, Norway and Finland from 2000 to 2007.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that Poland
attracted more students than any other nation over the period, while
Italy and Spain
's education centres became the lowest attraction in 2000 and 2007 respectively.
In the year 2000, 78% of the total studied in Poland
universities, the highest number of all time. Finland hit the second position by providing 70 % of seats to young adults in their colleges and Norway followed the trend by reaching 66 pupils. In Spain
and
,Correct word choice
apply
British
the percentage was noticed similar in their institutes, Correct article usage
the British
accounted
Wrong verb form
accounting
at
46,% Change preposition
for
whereas
Italy remained the lowest with only 38% of students.
Moving toward 2007,Finland remained successful to attract more people for higher education peaking at 70%, which is then
followed by Norway and Poland
with 66% and 64% respectively. Furthermore
, a noticeable growth can be seen in Italy graduates ,where the number changed from 38% to 52%. On the opposite, a downward trend is observed in Spain
, when admission got decreased by 5%.Submitted by vinder323 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words spain, poland with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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