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The diagram shows the life of a special type of tuna fish.

The diagram shows the life of a special type of tuna fish.
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The given diagram illustrates the life cycle of a particular
tuna
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fish
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.
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, it is apparent that there are a total of six stages in the process of
this
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fish
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. The picture clearly shows that the life cycle of
this
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 unique type of
tuna
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fish
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 initiates in deep water with mating between male and female species, which are sexually mature in the Nekton period. In
stage
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 two, female
tunas
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 lay eggs of about 0.04 inches in open water. With the spawning of eggs, the Plankton period starts. In 24 hours,
tuna
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 larvae hatch from those eggs, and they survive by using oil from the eff sac of their body. In the fourth
stage
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,
tuna
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 larvae transform into juvenile
tunas
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 that learn to become shoal members in open water and eat voraciously.
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, in 60-90 days, they complete their Plankton
stage
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 and start their Nekton
stage
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 in
stage
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 five. These
tunas
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 become free swimmers and stay in big shoals. In the sixth
stage
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, adult
tunas
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 are ready for mating again. The average lifespan of these
tunas
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 is 15-30 years.
To conclude
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, the diagram shows that
this
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 typical
tuna
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fish
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 passes around 15-30 years to complete the life cycle.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tuna, fish, stage, tunas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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