Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.
Today high levels of
sugar
are contained in many sources of Use synonyms
food
especially in manufactured Use synonyms
food
. And, of course, eating so much Use synonyms
sugar
is not good for our health: it can cause just a simple cavy, Use synonyms
for example
, but Linking Words
also
worse problems, like the increasing level of Linking Words
sugar
in blood. Some Use synonyms
people
suggest that sugary products should be more expensive, so Use synonyms
people
would buy less of them.
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According to
me, I think that Linking Words
this
solution is not the best one as sugary products include some types of Linking Words
food
that we eat everyday, Use synonyms
such
as bread or pasta. Linking Words
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foods, particularly the first one, are really important in our diet, so make them more expensive will influence not only our lifestyle, but Linking Words
also
some Linking Words
people
wouldn't be able anymore to buy the most important Use synonyms
food
for them. Just think Use synonyms
for example
to poort Linking Words
people
, who can maybe afford a few loads of bread per day: what would they eat if we increased bread price?
I think that the best solution for Use synonyms
this
problem would be informing Linking Words
people
about what they eat, because sometimes we don't even know that. They have already done something to inform Use synonyms
people
about the characteristics of Use synonyms
food
, of course, and labels are one of the most important thing, as they tell you all the ingredients of a particular Use synonyms
food
. Yet not many Use synonyms
people
spend some of their time reading labels, or, if they do it, they probably don't know the biggest part of the substances named in the list, as well not everybody knows that there is a specific order of ingredients in the list. So something we could do is organising some "talks" to inform Use synonyms
people
not only about the function of labels, but especially about the big amount of Use synonyms
sugar
we eat everyday. I think as well that Use synonyms
this
talks should be organised Linking Words
also
in schools, because Linking Words
also
children must be aware of what they eat; Linking Words
besides
, children can tell what they have learned by these "conferences" at their parents, so the whole family would eat better.
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To sum up
, I think it is not necessary to increase the prices of sugary Linking Words
food
and that all we need is information, that will lead Use synonyms
people
to eat less sugary Use synonyms
food
and, Use synonyms
as a consequence
, live better with less problems.Linking Words
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