Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

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Today high levels of
sugar
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are contained in many sources of
food
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especially in manufactured
food
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. And, of course, eating so much
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is not good for our health: it can cause just a simple cavy,
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, but
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worse problems, like the increasing level of
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in blood. Some
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suggest that sugary products should be more expensive, so
people
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would buy less of them.
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me, I think that
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solution is not the best one as sugary products include some types of
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that we eat everyday,
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as bread or pasta.
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foods, particularly the first one, are really important in our diet, so make them more expensive will influence not only our lifestyle, but
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some
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wouldn't be able anymore to buy the most important
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for them. Just think
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to poort
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, who can maybe afford a few loads of bread per day: what would they eat if we increased bread price? I think that the best solution for
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problem would be informing
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about what they eat, because sometimes we don't even know that. They have already done something to inform
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about the characteristics of
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, of course, and labels are one of the most important thing, as they tell you all the ingredients of a particular
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. Yet not many
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spend some of their time reading labels, or, if they do it, they probably don't know the biggest part of the substances named in the list, as well not everybody knows that there is a specific order of ingredients in the list. So something we could do is organising some "talks" to inform
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not only about the function of labels, but especially about the big amount of
sugar
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we eat everyday. I think as well that
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talks should be organised
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in schools, because
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children must be aware of what they eat;
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, children can tell what they have learned by these "conferences" at their parents, so the whole family would eat better.
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, I think it is not necessary to increase the prices of sugary
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and that all we need is information, that will lead
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to eat less sugary
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and,
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, live better with less problems.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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