Many people from rural areas moving to the cities .what problems can this cause?what can be solutinos

SOME
PEOPLE
FROM RURAL AREAS CAME TO
CITIES
IN SEARCH OF
JOBS
OPPORTUNITIES .
CITIES
OFFERS
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GREATER EMPLOYMENT POSSIBILITIES AND HIGHER STANDARD OF LIVING
PEOPLE
MIGRATE TO
CITIES
FROM THE COUNTRYSIDE.TRADITIONAL ACTIVITIES LIKE FARMING NEED FEWER WORKERS NOWADAYS. SOME
PEOPLE
DO NOT MANAGE TO FIND
JOBS
.LIFE IN
CITIES
HAS
IT'S
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DRAWBACKS ,THE COST OF LIVING IS HIGHER THAN IN RURAL AREAS .
FOR
EXAMPLE
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,EXAMPLE
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HOUSES IS USUALLY MUCH MORE
EXEPENSIVE
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EXPENSIVE
AND FOOD NOWADAYS IS MORE
EXEPENSIVE
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EXPENSIVE
.HOMELESSNESS AND POVERTY ARE COMMON
ON
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IN
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CITIES
.IF YOU DO NOT HAVE A JOB AND YOU DO NOT HAVE ANYONE
YU
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YOU
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KNOW YOU WILL LIVE IN THE STREETS. LIFE IN THE
CITIES
CAN BE EXTREMELY STRESSFUL CAUSE EVERYTHING IS FOR
SELL
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YOU CAN NOT HAVE ANYTHING FOR FREE.
CITIES
LACK A SENSE OF COMMUNITY ,
PEOPLE
DO NOT EVEN KNOW THEIR NEIGHBORS. THERE ARE PROBLEMS LIKE TRAFFIC CONGESTION OR TRAFFIC JAMS AND CRIMES .ARE POPULAR CAUSE IF YOU DO NOT HAVE MONEY YOU WILL
COMMITE
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COMMIT
CRIMES TO PUT FOOD ON YOUR TABLE. IN
COLCUSION
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CONCLUSION
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THE GOVERMENT
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GOVERMENT
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GOVERNMENT
CAN CREATE
JOBS
IN RURAL AREAS ,GIVE
PROJECT
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PROJECTS
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TO DO
HELPING
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TO HELP
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WITH FARMING STAFF AND TEACH
HOW
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THEM HOW
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TO DO AGRICULTURE IN
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THE RAIN
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RAIN
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RAINY
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SEASON AND NOT
RAIN
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RAINY
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SEASON FOR FREE TO GIVE THEM IDEAS
HOW
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ON HOW
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TO MAKE MONEY AND CREATE
JOBS
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban migration
  • infrastructure
  • urban sprawl
  • accommodation
  • degradation
  • public transportation
  • urban planning
  • remote work
  • cultural preservation
  • integration
  • assimilation
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