.Some people think that robots are very important for humans' future development. Others, however, think that robots are dangerous inventions that could have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years,technology is developing
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rapidly
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robots
become the hottest discussion topic n
society
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people
believe that
robots
play
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significant role in
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future development.
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,other
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that robot can be harmful and have
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way
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society
.In my view,I believe robot play
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indispisable
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indispensable
role in future but it
also
has some potential risk that can
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society
.
Robots
are not fresh
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,we already start to use
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in
diferent
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different
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ways
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.
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the
last
generation,
robots
have been
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sent
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by US
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for
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explore.In fact,
robots
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important to explore space
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because
human can’t
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in
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other planet but
robots
can.
Additionally
,
robots
can replace
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repetitive
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jobs
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such
as packaging in factories
then
original employees can work in other fields which can help technology develop.
Besides
that,
robots
also
can use in
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experiment
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,
likewise
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will release some gas that will
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harmful
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humans
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but
robots
not.
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,if
robots
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convenient and
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cheaper
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new employee will cause a lot of employee
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their job.
This
will increase the rate of crime because
people
can’t earn money through their job so they will
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some illegal activities which can help them earn money.
Besides
that,some
robots
may have intelligence it will
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our
society
such
as
robots
right.
In other words
,human is afraid
robots
replace their status. In conclusion,
robots
may help
people
doing research in various fields because
robots
can be made easily and
low
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risk.
While
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robot
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can indirect threat human status because
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strong ability.In my opinion,
robots
can help us develop in future but we need to regulate
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laws
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to control
robots
.
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