.Some people think that robots are very important for humans' future development. Others, however, think that robots are dangerous inventions that could have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In recent years,technology is developing

repidly

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rapidly

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become the hottest discussion topic n

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believe that

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future development.

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that robot can be harmful and have

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the

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generation,

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explore.In fact,

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important to explore space

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other planet but

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can replace

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original employees can work in other fields which can help technology develop.

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convenient and

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new employee will cause a lot of employee

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their job.

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some illegal activities which can help them earn money.

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may have intelligence it will

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replace their status. In conclusion,

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may help

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doing research in various fields because

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can be made easily and

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risk.

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can indirect threat human status because

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strong ability.In my opinion,

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can help us develop in future but we need to regulate

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to control

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