The chart below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The chart
illustrate
the ownership of electrical Change the verb form
illustrates
appliances
and amount
of time spent doing housework changes in one country between 1920 and 2019.
Correct article usage
the amount
Overall
, the percentage
of households with electrical appliances
are washing machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
. It is noticeable that Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
at
1920 the Change preposition
in
percentage
have been lower and then
gradually it has been increased rapidly over by the
time. Correct article usage
apply
Most
visible Correct article usage
The most
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
vacuum
cleaner and refrigerator as it is on the highest. The consumption of housework Correct article usage
the vacuum
for
per week has Change preposition
apply
been
rapidly decreased , Unnecessary verb
apply
as a result
of introduction
of electrical Add an article
the introduction
appliances
.
The number of hours
of housework has been at 50 hours
per week in 1920 , it has been gradually decreased at
nearly 35 Change preposition
to
hours
in 1940 and In 1960 it has fallen to 20 hours
and then
steadily it has been travelling till 2019.
The percentage
of households with electrical appliances
at the beginning of 1920, 0
% for Add a missing verb
was 0
refrigerator
, 30% for vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
, and 40% for washing Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
machine
. All of these three has been fluctuated in 1960 and it has been steadily growing. Fix the agreement mistake
machines
However
, the percentage
of washing machine
is at least use approximately Fix the agreement mistake
machines
at
75% in 2019 , Change preposition
apply
whereas
other
two Correct article usage
the other
appliances
at the highest reach by
100% in 2019.Change preposition
of
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Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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