The chart below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

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the ownership of electrical

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and

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of time spent doing housework changes in one country between 1920 and 2019.

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, the

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of households with electrical

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are washing

machine

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machines

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,

refrigerator

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refrigerators

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and vacuum

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cleaners

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. It is noticeable that

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1920 the

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have been lower and

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gradually it has been increased rapidly over by

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time.

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visible

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vacuum

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cleaner and refrigerator as it is on the highest. The consumption of housework

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per week has

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rapidly decreased ,

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of

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of electrical

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. The number of

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of housework has been at 50

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per week in 1920 , it has been gradually decreased

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nearly 35

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in 1940 and In 1960 it has fallen to 20

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steadily it has been travelling till 2019. The

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of households with electrical

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at the beginning of 1920,

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% for

refrigerator

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refrigerators

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, 30% for vacuum

cleaner

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cleaners

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, and 40% for washing

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machines

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. All of these three has been fluctuated in 1960 and it has been steadily growing.

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of washing

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machines

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is at least use approximately

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75% in 2019 ,

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other

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two

appliances

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at the highest reach

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100% in 2019.