The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
The given graph represents the waste in
tonnes
that is
produced by three organizations over a period of 15 years. As per the data, company C saw a constant increase throughout the duration as compared to others.
Firstly
, starting from 2000 to 2005, Company B had a steady rise and reached its peak of 10 tonnes
and eventually after that it saw a decline and kept on decreasing till 2015 and closing at 3. In the case of corporation C, in the starting period, it stood at 4 tonnes
and after that, it kept on climbing the figures and at the described ending time frame, its value was 10 in terms of waste that
is
generated.
Change the verb form
are
Lastly
, for the third corporation A, during the starting phase, it ranked the highest as compared to others but with the movement of time, it went on a constant decline and finally
, stood at 8 tonnes
. So in terms of the final observation, it is slightly less than A.Submitted by patelharnish38 on
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