In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

In my opinion teenage
are
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not allowed
go
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outside unless accompanied by an
adult
is a good threat because
in
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teenage
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teenager
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will do anything for
his
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curiosity and cant choose bad or good. If
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a teenage
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teenage
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accompanied
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by an
adult
, the
adult
will tell
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the teenage
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teenage
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what are
you
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they
she
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will
to
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do bad or good
,
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and in the US
night time
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is very scary just like
a
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gotham
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city
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a lot of
robbery
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, shooting
fight
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, drugs, alcohol,
kidnaped
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. So in my POV is good because
adult
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cant protect teenage and tell what is good or bad.
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