The diagrams show Queen Mary Hospital at the three different stages in its development: 1960, 1980 and 2000.
The diagrams show Queen Mary Hospital at the three different stages in its development: 1960, 1980, and 2000.
The provided diagrams illustrate how Queen Mary Hospital developed in 1960, 1980, and 2000.
As can be seen from the three maps, the hospital had been developed on the south of the Main Road and had been bigger over time.
In 1960, the hospital was in the north of the
area
, and a shopping centre
was in the west of the hospital. Besides
, there was a car
park
in the south of the hospital, and farmland was in the west of the car
park
and in the south of the shopping centre
. By 1980, the shopping centre
had been demolished. Moreover
, in the same area
, a cancer centre
had been built, and the hospital had been expanded as a pharmacy. In addition
, the farmland had been developed, and a nursing school had been constructed. By 2000, the nursing school had been relocated to the part of the west area
of the car
park
, so the car
park
had been smaller. Furthermore
, the cancer centre
was expanded to the area
located in the nursing school.Submitted by bestabis on
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