The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
The line graph shows the data on the amount of garbage discharged by three
companies
from 2000 to 2015
Overall
, it is clear that
the volume of waste in companies
A and B decreased in 2015 compared to 2000. In contrast
, an upward trend was seen in Correct your spelling
cooperation
operation
coperation
C
Looking at the line graph more closely one can see that firm A made the most trash of the three Correct your spelling
cooperation
companies
, but it declined steadily to 2015. whereas
the amount of waste business B made went up until 2005, it plummeted to 3tonnes, decreasing by 7tonnes since then
over the period of ten years. It finally
became to emit the least quantity of garbage in 2015. On the other side, the quantity of waste in company C rose heavily more than twice, presenting from 4 tonnes
in 2000 to 10 tonnes
in 2015. So It was ahead of Companies
A and B in terms of the volume of trash discharged.Submitted by ku-hmi on
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