Some countries now have people from different cultures and ethnic groups. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

In the past, it was not common to see foreigners,
however
, more and more
countries
are now having residents from different cultures and ethnic groups. Some people believe
this
is a positive phenomenon
while
others hold the opposite point of view. I agree with the former and in the following paragraph, I will try to discuss the root behind
this
development and elaborate on my perspectives. There are some reasons why some
countries
have foreign settlers. First of all, some people move to more advanced
countries
for better quality of life
such
as higher
salary
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, better educational resources, and great social welfare.
Moreover
, some poor souls leave their home
countries
to get away from civil wars.
In addition
, developed
countries
that face
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shortage
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attract foreign
talents
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by implementing friendly immigration policies Cultural diversity and ethnic groups bring benefits to local society.
For example
, locals would have the
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to enjoy delicious exotic food.
Moreover
, cultural diversity expands/broadens citizens’ horizons.
Furthermore
, the increase
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population helps increase a country's productivity and boost economic development. In conclusion, individuals emigrate overseas to pursue a better life. States attract immigrants
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incentives to fix the lack of
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. These are the two main reasons why
countries
have alien residents. In my opinion, a society consisting of various ethnicities is progressive, and the local economy is benefited
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it.
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