The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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science
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otherwise
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,otherwise
science
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science
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the previous innovation that Correct your spelling
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is useful
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science
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science
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whole
development
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the development
this
subject could become a disaster.
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further
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other discipline
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such
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link people all together, bringing more friendships and Correct article usage
the internet
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more
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science
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people's
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. I highly recommend the government should make law
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite