The family has a greate influence on children development but the influence from outside the home play bigger part in children's life. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that family play a vital role in a child's development, but there is no denying that outer influence impacted their mental and social growth. I completely agree with
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To begin
with, a child learns his or her first lesson from their parents, it can be anything like language learning, communication skills or any physical activities.Linking Words
Therefore
elders are responsible for their basic progress, Linking Words
however
, these fundamental skills decide their later interests. Once Linking Words
children
start schooling their choices get changed or impacted by other students or teachers in the institutes.Use synonyms
For example
, if a child liked to watch cartoon all the Linking Words
time
, and met someone who watches animated movies, he or she sometimes adapt their selection and ignore they are on her interests.
Apart from the school environment, there are other aspects that affect youngsters, like social media. With the intense use of the internet, Use synonyms
children
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in front of television or cell phones, which not only affects their physical growth but impacted their mental focus.Use synonyms
For instance
, by watching liquor advertisements, some start drinking it, thinking of it as a fashion statement. Linking Words
Furthermore
, It is very important for parents to look out for their kid's company, as Linking Words
children
are like plain paper and learn whatever they see, so watching or having bad company can impact them negatively.
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To sum up
, outside society influences Linking Words
children
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parents are the main building block. Spending more Linking Words
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with offspring can help them to choose between good and bad, Use synonyms
instead
of taking wrong decisions influenced by others.Linking Words
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