Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars?
In the
last
three decades, the number
of private cars
has risen considerably in city areas across the globe. In my opinion, It is completely true and governments should restrict car ownership by taxes and provide the convenience of public transportation means.
One of the main reasons for the increasing number
of private cars
is the presentation Change preposition
of middle-class
middle-class
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of middle-class
people
across the globe. In many countries, particularly developing countries, the number
of middle-class citizens has significantly increased. This
new class of people
is associated with prosperity in which car ownership is one of their lifestyles. In Indonesia, for example
, the government has been trying to provide convenient infrastructures such
as bridges and highways to cater for the need for cars
. In addition
to this
, there are many new automobile industries in the market to promote more affordable cars
. It enables people
to have private cars
.
It is challenging for the government to prevent people
from owning cars
. However
, new regulations such
as high taxes should be taken into consideration in order to restrict the massive number
of private cars
. Many advanced nations, such
as the USA and Belgium, are compelling examples of how governments are successfully managing this
problem. People
then
have to rethink when they want to buy a new car or desire to have more than one. However
, it is important to note that this
regulation was supported by improving public transportation such
as trains and buses with excellent services. These kinds of regulations benefit people
and should be implemented in other nations.
In conclusion, despite the fact that the rising number
of cars
coincides with the increasing number
of middle-class people
, governments should pay attention to this
problem with tax regulations and equip their cities with comfortable modes of public transportation.Submitted by salwafahanim on
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