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Some children spend hours every day on Smartphones. why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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An increasing number of
children
 have become addicted to portables in the
last
 two decades. From my personal perspective, it may be a result of the parent’s behaviour or the increased amount of modern distractions among
children
 . I partly agree that would take advantages thereby developing creativity but
overall
, I stick to the idea that can lead to health problems in
children
. With tech inventions and the internet progresses, a large segment of people spend time on social media. As adults are the best pattern for their offspring , demands for smartphone utilization are on the rise among
children
. The most salient example of
this
 is changing game methods . In the past times, parents spent more time with their
children
 at home by reading a good book or playing a board game,
whereas
 nowadays adults themselves became addicted to online
games
.
Therefore
, offspring are becoming experts in using online
games
 .
In addition
,smartphones inverted
children
’s priority in all situations and
also
 in schools. All inventions have pros and cons and portable devices are one of the necessities that the world cannot imagine without them.In recent years, students can deal with their educational problems thanks to several educational applications on the internet.
Moreover
, wrestling complex and twisted online
games
 bring up more creative
children
.
On the other hand
, a proper glance at a screen can lead to health problems as same as a sustained seat on the couch and playing
games
.
Hence
, unless consumer electronics are not limited, their drawbacks to
children
’s bodies are on the rise.
To conclude
, the responsible for
this
 trend are the parents themselves . I am personally of the opinion that despite all benefits that consumer electronic rings, the rate of occupied time on smartphones should be restricted to their side effects on physical health.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • smartphones
  • usage
  • technology
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • entertainment
  • gaming
  • social media
  • communication
  • educational resources
  • addiction
  • dependence
  • negative effects
  • physical health
  • mental health
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