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Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do to try and have a satisfying working life?

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Nowadays, some individuals believe that engaging early in
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 can lead to
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 satisfaction. In my opinion,
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 approach may work for some professions, it is not a universal rule and it may have negative consequences in some cases. On one hand, deciding to pursue a specific career
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 early
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 is beneficial in some special academic
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, becoming a physician requires a great amount of effort, studying ,and money and it is necessary
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 can provide financial stability and can increase the chance of getting a well-paid
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, especially in
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 organizations.
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,
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 from young
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 can deprive young individuals
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 exploring different fields and they miss a great chance of knowing themselves and their genuine
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 and talents in their prime years when they are energetic and enthusiastic. Being associated with a routine and boring office
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 can lead them into a gloomy monotony and bring about frustration and depression.
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 satisfaction can be achieved in several ways.
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, a person should consider his occupation not only a way to meet the daily living costs but
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 an interesting and enjoyable activity,
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 it becomes a frustrating task
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 a person is doomed to repeat every single day.
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, having
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positive and
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 communication with co-workers can enhance
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 feeling in an employee.
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 yourself in a friendly and helpful environment can
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 a person’s mental health and lead to better cooperation and making the
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 more enjoyable and satisfying.
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, I opine that the state of
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 satisfaction is a multifaceted concept that depends on not just a single factor, but myriads of various ones.
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