Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do to try and have a satisfying working life?

Nowadays, some individuals believe that engaging early in
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market for young
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can lead to
job
satisfaction. In my opinion,
although
this
approach may work for some professions, it is not a universal rule and it may have negative consequences in some cases. On one hand, deciding to pursue a specific career
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early
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is beneficial in some special academic
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.
For instance
, becoming a physician requires a great amount of effort, studying ,and money and it is necessary
to begin
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occupation
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young
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. It
also
can provide financial stability and can increase the chance of getting a well-paid
job
, especially in
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organizations.
However
,
this
idea is not generally positive for all people and in all careers. Sticking to a certain
job
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can deprive young individuals
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exploring different fields and they miss a great chance of knowing themselves and their genuine
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and talents in their prime years when they are energetic and enthusiastic. Being associated with a routine and boring office
job
can lead them into a gloomy monotony and bring about frustration and depression.
Job
satisfaction can be achieved in several ways.
Firstly
, a person should consider his occupation not only a way to meet the daily living costs but
also
an interesting and enjoyable activity,
otherwise
it becomes a frustrating task
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a person is doomed to repeat every single day.
Secondly
, having
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positive and
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communication with co-workers can enhance
this
feeling in an employee.
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yourself in a friendly and helpful environment can
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a person’s mental health and lead to better cooperation and making the
job
more enjoyable and satisfying.
To conclude
, I opine that the state of
job
satisfaction is a multifaceted concept that depends on not just a single factor, but myriads of various ones.
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