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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in 5 different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in 5 different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the information about the various five
countries
(Ireland,
Turkey
,Spain,Italy and Sweden) expenditures on
Food
\Tobacco,Clothing\Footwear and Leisure\Education in 2002.
However
, calculations had been mentioned in percentages,
Overall
it is clear that
 the various five
countries
 had spent the most on
Food
\Drink\Tobacco
while
Turkey
 was the biggest consumer.
However
,after
Food
 Clothing\Footwear were the highest purchased thing Itlay is the number one in
this
 column
while
 Education was the lowest budget thing among all five
countries
 and
Turkey
 spent most education among all
countries
. In terms of
Food
\Drinks\Tobacco , its biggest consumer was
Turkey
 which spent 32.14% on
Food
 but Sweden had the smallest expenditures of 15.77% on
Food
 in comparison with Clothing\Footwear which was the second highly preferred product Itlay had the highest and Sweden had the lowest expenditure of 9.00% and 5.40% respectively.
On the other hand
, Leisure \Education was the lowest in
this
 list
whereas
Food
 was the highest.
However
,
Turkey
 spent 4.46% on Education.
Furthermore
, Italy and Spain were the approximately same both spent around about 3.21% .
However
,Spain had a budget of 1.98% .
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, turkey, food with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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