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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in 5 different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in 5 different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the information about the various five
countries
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(Ireland,
Turkey
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,Spain,Italy and Sweden) expenditures on
Food
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\Tobacco,Clothing\Footwear and Leisure\Education in 2002.
However
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, calculations had been mentioned in percentages,
Overall
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it is clear that
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 the various five
countries
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 had spent the most on
Food
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\Drink\Tobacco
while
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Turkey
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 was the biggest consumer.
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,after
Food
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 Clothing\Footwear were the highest purchased thing Itlay is the number one in
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 column
while
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 Education was the lowest budget thing among all five
countries
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 and
Turkey
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 spent most education among all
countries
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. In terms of
Food
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\Drinks\Tobacco , its biggest consumer was
Turkey
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 which spent 32.14% on
Food
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 but Sweden had the smallest expenditures of 15.77% on
Food
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 in comparison with Clothing\Footwear which was the second highly preferred product Itlay had the highest and Sweden had the lowest expenditure of 9.00% and 5.40% respectively.
On the other hand
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, Leisure \Education was the lowest in
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 list
whereas
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Food
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 was the highest.
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,
Turkey
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 spent 4.46% on Education.
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, Italy and Spain were the approximately same both spent around about 3.21% .
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,Spain had a budget of 1.98% .
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, turkey, food with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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