The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
The diagram presents the average change in prices of three different metals in 2014 monthly.
Overall
, the
price
of nickel is the most changed
price
at the beginning of 2014. The prices of all metals shift slightly
at the end
of that year. In 2014, the
price
of nickel started at 6 per
cent
in January.
Then
, its
price
dropped significantly from 6 per
cent
in January to -3 per
cent
in
June
. After the drop, it fluctuated between July and Oct. After that, it bounced back to 1 per
cent
in Nov and remained the same in
Dec
. The
price
of copper was at 2 per
cent
in Jan. It dropped continuously from 2 per
cent
in Jan to 0.5 per
cent
in
June
.
Then
, it rose to 1 per
cent
in
June
and stayed the same in Sep, and it ended at 1.5 per
cent
in
Dec
.
Lastly
, the
price
of Zinc began at 2 per
cent
in Jan. It jumped to 3 per
cent
in Feb.
Then
, it dropped continuously to -1 per
cent
in
June
and remained at 0.5 per
cent
in July for 3 months.
Then
, it increased dramatically to 2 per
cent
in
Dec
. In conclusion, the
price
of all 3 metals started at different rates of change.
However
, their prices are stable in
Dec
2014.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, cent, june, dec with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly change
  • prices of metals
  • trend
  • spike
  • fluctuation
  • increase
  • decrease
  • sharp rise
  • sharp fall
  • stability
  • volatility
  • data points
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • external factors
  • influences
  • market dynamics
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