The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
The diagram presents the average change in prices of three different metals in 2014 monthly.
Overall
, the price
of nickel is the most changed price
at the beginning of 2014. The prices of all metals shift slightly at the end
of that year.
In 2014, the price
of nickel started at 6 per cent
in January. Then
, its price
dropped significantly from 6 per cent
in January to -3 per cent
in June
. After the drop, it fluctuated between July and Oct. After that, it bounced back to 1 per cent
in Nov and remained the same in Dec
. The price
of copper was at 2 per cent
in Jan. It dropped continuously from 2 per cent
in Jan to 0.5 per cent
in June
. Then
, it rose to 1 per cent
in June
and stayed the same in Sep, and it ended at 1.5 per cent
in Dec
. Lastly
, the price
of Zinc began at 2 per cent
in Jan. It jumped to 3 per cent
in Feb. Then
, it dropped continuously to -1 per cent
in June
and remained at 0.5 per cent
in July for 3 months. Then
, it increased dramatically to 2 per cent
in Dec
.
In conclusion, the price
of all 3 metals started at different rates of change. However
, their prices are stable in Dec
2014.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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