The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
The graph display, about the amount of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. There are three company names A, B, and C.
Firstly
, company A have more than 3 tonnes of waste in the year 2000, and after 2005 it increased by 6000 kg, in 2010 it was more than 6 tonnes and in 2015 it was more than 9 but less than 12.
Secondly
, in firm B in the year 2000, there was nearly 7000 kg of waste, then
in ,2005 it increase by 10 and after 2010 it decrease by 6 and later on it was 5 only. In 2005 and 2010 around a high of 10 and was less than 7.
Thirdly
, overall
in institution C in starting 20 century it was 12 which was reduced by less than 9 in years 2015.
In conclusion, it can be said that company A was not eco-friendly as well as
firm c was producing eco-friendly goods over institution B was developing.Submitted by purvametaliya99 on
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