some people say that the best way to improve public health is by incraesing sports facilities. others, however, say that this would have a little effect on puclic health and that other measures are required.

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public believe that their lifestyle can be improved in the aspect of

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by increasing the

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of sports centres around them

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, some people disagree

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statement by arguing that there is no relation between

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sport

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and

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need other requirements.

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both sides of the

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and try to draw some conclusions. Some people believe that

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access to

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sport

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centres

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as gyms, swimming pools and tennis courts

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etc, they can achieve

healthy

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body.

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growing

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of physical

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point that they can enjoy

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sport

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have little time on a busy day

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near their home.

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, people can discover easily

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what kind of

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they prefer when they can see various activities in their

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.

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that some

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sport

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cannot attract the public unless they eat healthy foods, keep personal hygiene and their environment.

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to improve citizens’

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, they suggest that government need to set some rules for food safety by checking cooking ingredients and food production process and for cleanliness by providing knowledge of unhygienic ways of living.

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information on how to keep citizens’ daily lives healthy even if they have to stay at home. In conclusion, I believe that government should hold public forums and

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to give

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knowledge and encourage them to keep themselves clean and their environment to get a clean and healthy neighbourhood,

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of

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sport

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facilities

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.