Some parents buy their kids a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages of a child having a large number of toys?

In
this
day and age, parents tend to purchase their children a great amount of entertainment tools.
While
this
is a very debated subject in psychology books, the main advantage in
this
case would be the fact that through toys,
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assure their children's happiness.
On the other hand
, one of the most problematic disadvantages would be that kids end up being excessively spoiled.
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and the most important reason for buying an irrational number of toys is for parents to see their kids excited and overjoyed.
Moreover
,
this
purchase buys them
time
as well.
This
is because
instead
of wasting
time
on planning elaborate activities, adults prefer buying
time
through entertainment tools.
For instance
, many family friends of mine prefer going to the store before kindergarten to
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their toddler does not cry, or after to ensure that for the rest of the evening until bedtime their baby would be busy.
While
this
method is surely effective for the reasons above, quality
time
is usually more appreciated in the long run. An obvious disadvantage is that young people who get used to getting everything they want become extremely entitled.
Furthermore
, children who are used to receiving everything they want at any
time
of the day, usually cannot integrate well
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, whether it is their school or their future workplace.
For example
, they end up actually manipulating their parents in order to have things their way. The reason for
that is
the fact that
instead
of explaining calmly and discussing, the sound of their kid crying is so unbearable for some people that they just get them what they want. So, they understand that tantrums and crying help them reach their goal. In conclusion, entertainment tools are necessary for the young generation, but that does not mean that adults must exaggerate with them. I believe that balancing a healthy amount of
time
spent together combined with toys is the perfect key to a happy and healthy child.
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