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The table illustrates the salaries of secondary/ high school teachers in 5 different countries (Australia, Denmark,Luxembourg,Japan,Korea) in 2009.

The table illustrates the salaries of secondary/ high school teachers in 5 different countries (Australia, Denmark,Luxembourg,Japan,Korea) in 2009.
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The table illustrates the
salaries
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 of secondary/ high school
teachers
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 in 5 different
countries
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 (
Australia
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,
Denmark
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,
Luxembourg
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,Japan,Korea) in 2009.
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,
while
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 the
teachers
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 in
Luxembourg
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 were the most
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,
teachers
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 from
Australia
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 were the lowest paid. The amount of time it took for a
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teachers
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teacher
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 in
Denmark
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 to get the highest
salaries
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 was faster
more
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than
other
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in other
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countries
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 In the first group, there are 2
countries
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 where the
teachers
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 will have their maximum
salaries
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 before 15
years
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, which are
Australia
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 and
Denmark
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.
Teachers
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 will have only to work 9 and 8
years
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 to get the highest salary. In
Australia
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 ,
teachers
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 will get 28000 and after 9
years
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 they will get the highest
salaries
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 at 48000.In
Denmark
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,
teachers
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 will get their
salaries
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 about 45000 and after 8
years
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 they will get the maximum
salaries
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 about 54000. In the second group, there are 3
countries
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which
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in which
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 even
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teachers
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if teachers
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working
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work
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for 15
years
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 , the
salaries
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 still increase which are
Luxembourg
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, Japan and Korea .The highest
salaries
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 are in
Luxembourg
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, in which their first year will get 80000 and it will always increase to 30
years
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 that they will get
the
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a
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 maximum
about
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 132000 , but if they just work for 15
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 , the
salaries
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 are only 119000. Second place is Japan ,
teachers
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 will get 34000 and the maximum is 86000 after 37
years
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. The
last
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 is Korea , in the first year
the
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they
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 will get 30000 and reach
to
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the
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a
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 maximum
62000
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of 62000
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 after 34
years
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries, teachers, countries, australia, denmark, luxembourg, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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