The most important aim of science ought to be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The dominance of cutting-edge technology has brought about myriads of drastic changes in human society.

Therefore

, many people consider scientific innovations as opportunities for improvement in their lives. From my point of view, I strongly agree with the afore-mentioned assertion and through

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I will analyse some reasons for my decision.

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with, regarded as the key to human evolution, science offers humanity the creation of various technological inventions and theories which has benefited the standard of living in various countries. Technologies have a broad-based influence on many areas in the world, ranging from education

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to construction,

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logistic

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. Students are no longer worrying about missing a lesson for private reasons and are unable to keep up with

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peers.

Due to

the development of scientific devices and the Internet, lessons now are recorded and uploaded online for absent learners. Not only students but

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the workload of the employees has been reduced. Since many inventions have computerised the process of manufacturing products.

Secondly

, technology could ameliorate the environment and

also

indicate warnings of natural disasters. In fact, many technophobes would argue that the presence of many state-of-the-art inventions is the cause of environmental pollution.

However

, the machines currently are producing less amount of

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than

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used to in the past because the inventors have noticed that their scientific research is damaging the environment.

In contrast

, there are now many environmentally friendly vehicles which help to ease

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air pollution,

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buses

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,

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and bicycle

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bicycle

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.

Besides

, some of those innovations could help citizens to avoid typical disasters

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as

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cyclones, tsunamis, volcano eruptions,

earthquakes

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. There is a meteorological or geographical sensor which will manifest approaching disasters. In conclusion, with the development of technology,

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people’s lives are improving

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time, especially in the standard of living and the reduction in environmental problems.