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Some people think watching sports is wastage of time during leisure time. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #sports #wastage #time #leisure
Nowadays some teens spend their time with friends or
relax
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,
other
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while other
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 teens study as much as they can. But there is the question: what's better for them?
Firstly
, talking about learning something new,
this
 skill is very important and useful today. It's a guarantee of
great
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 career. That's why, it's the best way to become rich and successful, even if some people think that studying teenagers are losing their childhood and adolescence.
Secondly
, spending time with friends is
also
 important, but only because of the connections. When you're an adult, you need to rely on somebody, that's why it's
also
 important.
Thirdly
, learning new things with friends is
also
 possible and effective. Studying with classmates is
very
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 cool example that shows all advantages of
this
 kind of learning something new. Definitely, both of these options are very important and one of them can't exist without the other. That's why people should be communicative and clever
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • leisure time
  • inspiration
  • motivation
  • overcoming challenges
  • relax
  • destress
  • mental health
  • social activity
  • community
  • passive consumption
  • productive activities
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • physical activity
  • moderation
  • active pursuits
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